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Songbreeze Swifteye by 1-Renaissance Songbreeze Swifteye by 1-Renaissance
Marlfox

Songbreeze Swifteye! Requested by :iconfelldohthesquirrel:

So here's my hand at sketching Redwall squirrels. I didn't know what Song was wearing so I just made something up. Though I'm sleepy and just about ready to drop, I wanted to finish this anyway. I knew I couldn't sleep without seeing the outcome of how I'd sketch Songbreeze. As always with drawing Redwall characters, this was fun! :D

As always I'm open to compliments as well as criticism or whatever. So if there is anything I need to note for next time PLEASE tell me. I don't know if I still have that tendency to make the characters have a weasel-like build. :D

It's 12:44 AM and now I can go to sleep in peace. :sleep:

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Songbreeze Swifteye; Marlfox (C) Brian Jacques
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:iconsylamorase:
sylamorase Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
A fabulous sketch of my favorite character. I always thought Song got the short end when compared to Rose of Mariel. Great job.
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Creative-Dreamr Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Songbreeze was a great character.=D

Good job. I really like her expression and her eyes came out pretty.
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Redtriangle Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010  Student Digital Artist
By the way, she look determined. :D
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Redtriangle Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I really like her. :love:
This is a good drawing of Song. She's pretty and her name. :D
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DCLeadboot Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, yeah! Good old Songbreeze! :D
Love this character - one of those "my type of female" characters that shows spirit instead of being a damsel-in-distress type!

Looks great how you've drawn her there - nice scenery, too! :)
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1-Renaissance Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2010
Thanks. :D
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AlizeraSong Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Great work! :clap:

I think everything that I've noticed that could be changed has already been mentioned. :D

Wonderful backround by the way!
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1-Renaissance Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010
:D
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Kelaiah Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
This is great, I love it! :D I love how you added in her long eyelashes. :D

The head looks fine to me, but, like you've already noticed, the neck should be just a little bit shorter. I think I'd also make the arms a little shorter too, and the tail should be a little more fuller, like maybe it should go up above her head more. Maybe. ;)

But other than that, this is a fantastic drawing! You're really coming along, actually. :D :D :D
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1-Renaissance Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010
I was thinking the same thing about the tail too. I'll keep that in mind the next time I decide to draw a squirrel. :D

Thankyou thankyou thankyou! :D:D:D:D:D
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Kelaiah Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010
Your welcome! :D :D :D
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FelldohTheSquirrel Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What Knuckles said about the her is true, something to improve on next time.

But it looks great! Thank you!!! 8D
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1-Renaissance Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
Just so you know I fixed the tail a bit. :D:D
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FelldohTheSquirrel Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Looks good!
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1-Renaissance Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
:bow:
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FelldohTheSquirrel Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:clap:
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Knuckles5000 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You still did a really good job! Though the only things I could notice were the head (though not necessarily the neck), does look a bit like your weasels. Also, I think the tail could be just a tad longer. Those are just a few things that I think would make it look a little more squirrel-like.

I also like how you did the backround!
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1-Renaissance Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
Hey, tail's longer now. :D
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Knuckles5000 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That definitely does make it look better.
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1-Renaissance Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
Thanks. :D
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marshallvondelini Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
It's a squirrel neck... don't worry. I have plenty of time to observe the damned little pineys in our woodpile and stand of pine trees... (And wow are they pesky...)

And, after all, this is anthro. You can do whatever you want to your characters. Within what you believe is reason. :D

Outstanding!
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1-Renaissance Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
I hope so. I just want to get them to look like their species. Weasels should look like weasels and squirrels should look like squirrels.....

Thanks you:D:D
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marshallvondelini Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome, and thanks for the watch!
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1-Renaissance Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
Damn! I see that weasel neck!!!
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